Sparkling Jewels

I look out of the window
and I am captured
by the gleaming grass
during the night
there was a heavy dew
now the world sparkles
precious jewels dot
bringing new life
to the land
I take a handful
but it jut melts
somethings 
are better
to being 
admired 
from afar like
jewels of dew
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 9:02 AM
I love your beautiful write/story. Yes, the dew does look like jewels on the grass...... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Hamilton Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:47 PM
ty Paula I have posted all I wrote in hospital so back to the drawing board for me hugs Shadow
Rose  Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Somethings are dear Shadow. From afar we can dream and keep the illusion, of all that is bright and beautiful. You mirror this one nicely, hugs
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 4:26 PM
ty glad you feel it too hugs Shadow
One Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 11:42 AM
Deep poetry Shadow.. its like we have hope but it fades.. just like everything beautiful.. Hope you are well..
Hamilton Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 12:58 PM
hi SO please you liked it . Will know more on Friday go for pre op check then. I hope its soon lol hugs Shadow
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