Sparkling Jewels

I look out of the window
and I am captured
by the gleaming grass
during the night
there was a heavy dew
now the world sparkles
precious jewels dot
bringing new life
to the land
I take a handful
but it jut melts
somethings 
are better
to being 
admired 
from afar like
jewels of dew
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Date: 2/21/2024 9:02:00 AM
I love your beautiful write/story. Yes, the dew does look like jewels on the grass...... Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2024 3:47:00 PM
ty Paula I have posted all I wrote in hospital so back to the drawing board for me hugs Shadow
Date: 2/15/2024 3:55:00 PM
Somethings are dear Shadow. From afar we can dream and keep the illusion, of all that is bright and beautiful. You mirror this one nicely, hugs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/15/2024 4:26:00 PM
ty glad you feel it too hugs Shadow
Date: 2/13/2024 11:42:00 AM
Deep poetry Shadow.. its like we have hope but it fades.. just like everything beautiful.. Hope you are well..
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/13/2024 12:58:00 PM
hi SO please you liked it . Will know more on Friday go for pre op check then. I hope its soon lol hugs Shadow
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