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Sparkling Among the Woodlands

Such colours of natural beauty your eyes feast upon all this one considers this so fully what a picture! don't want to miss The sun shines through the trees bringing the colours by real power dazzled one's eyes so very bright makes you think of a pretty flower Along its pathway on either side lovely little flowers beside the grass so very green fully attractive blinds your sight superior class Strolling along singing a song joining in with the birds so sweet they wing themselves forever high stand in awe at picture complete What a picture this conveys one wants to walk this all-day so splendid, so stunning loveliness indeed what can one say

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Date: 12/23/2020 9:19:00 AM
When we lived in Taunton in England for 18 months ( I was 5 and 6) we used to go for walks every afternoon. The woods were just a short walk from our house and there was a river running through these woods and a million or so blue bells, i still remember everything and our dog buster, a boxer. Beautiful write Gordon, may Christmas be a blessed time for you and your family, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/23/2020 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Jenny, Glad you loved this one and it must have been lovely to be able to walk so near woods when you lived in Taunton. I know Taunton is famous for Cider but at that age you wouldn't be tasting any!! Have a very blessed Christmas, Gordon
Date: 12/16/2020 10:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery in your nature walk, with very nice rhythm and flow. Makes me want to go out on a walk in the woods! Hope all is well with you ~ John
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/16/2020 1:04:00 PM
Thanks John, Glad you loved it and yes there's nothing like a walk in the woods especially in the spring or autumn which always feels like the best months for it. Take care, Blessings, Gordon
Date: 12/16/2020 7:53:00 AM
The beauty of his creation that we see all around us especially in woodland. Hope you're well Gordon Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/16/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Tom, Glad you enjoyed it and hope you're well. We're well here though be Glad to see 2021. Blessings,Gordon

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