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Sparkles and Dust

What if we are energy. The sparkling remains of a great supernova. This must be why I love you. Why every time I think of you the stars shine from your hair and your eyes. Why your skin look like porcelain as you turn toward me like an angel from the sun.

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Nicholas Henderson

Date: 11/20/2015 11:13:00 PM

Very well written, what a feeling of love this read offers. Visceral.

Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 10:14:00 PM

Per :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin

Date: 11/16/2015 10:32:00 AM

This vision of energy is charming. Congrats. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2015 8:33:00 AM

- Hei Per Martin - Velkommen til P-Soup - Håper du vil trives her sammen med oss - Jeg har vert medlem i flere år, og liker meg veldig godt her - Lykke til ! - // Anne-Lise (Norge:)

Per Martin Steen
Date: 11/2/2015 8:34:00 AM

I am overwhelmed by all the positive feedback I get. So thank you very much for your kind words. It is REALLY a big motivation for me. It makes me want to contribute more to this brilliant page. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/1/2015 3:14:00 PM

Hi Per, wow a stunning read. The imagery is lovely. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 11/1/2015 9:37:00 AM

Per, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Per Martin Steen
Date: 11/1/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thanks for your reply. My name is Per Martin Steen. I am 32 years of age, and I live in Norway in a small village called Grong. For the time being I have no job, so when I have nothing to do I write poems. Again thank you very much for your reply on one of my poems. Maybe we will stay in touch. Thank you. Per Martin