SPARKING LOUDLY

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Benjamin Bartley.

I wasn’t born on the Virgin Islands No books prophesized my coming No shiny stars above the hospital bed Only handmaidens welcomed me in Most likely with awe struck expressions Slap some air into that baby me, please Make me scream, make me cry out loud What have I gotten myself into Mom says tears streamed down my cheeks Yet, she swears I was smiling too Nothing’s changed now that I’m old and grey I’m still just a spark igniting a flame I still smile when I cry At all the lies and the pain ... Nobody’s perfect

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 7/30/2025 6:18:00 AM

Hello Benjamin, this is a lovely piece and an enjoyable read. I was told I cried and cried. I still do. Have a great day.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/30/2025 4:32:00 AM

An average birth of an average person in an average world. I think most of us can relate. We're glad you're here Ben. Interesting write and fascinating photo