Spark in the dark

Don’t blame me if you lose my love halfway.
 I once wished too much, like a spark in the dark,
 and built a house of love-dreams.
 You took my hand with gladness,
 then slowly unmade me with your quiet indifference,
 like a tide pulling sand from the coast.

Don’t blame me if you lose my love halfway,
 And pretend my love, nothing but a fantasy whim.
 When your silence cuts deeper like a knife
than your words ever healed my life.
You never saw the scars you left, like cracks in glass—
 Or perhaps you saw them and let them pass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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February 16, 2026 at 10:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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