Notes About The Poem

Written 1st September, 2026

Spare Me

WHAT
fair and narrow,
dungeon cave,

The picture of thy mind.
art thou, brave;
were but fools,
Not one of them a knave.

Bright thy line, sire!
So ran the way,
And ended in a mire.

Spare me
let me live:

I ask no kindness at thy hand,
For thou hast none to give.


(Blackout of 422. Epigrams against the Earl of Galloway by Robert Burns)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Scott Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 12:28 AM
Love the verses very poetic❤️
Smith  Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 12:30 AM
This blackout was very rewarding👀
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 9:09 PM
elizabethan in mood and language...so fine, ali!
Smith  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 9:13 PM
It worked out better than I first thought.❤️
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 8:14 PM
I am going to use my extensive background in bowling* (aka 'ten-pins') to analyze your poem: Considering the title, you picked the correct alternative to 'Strike Me!' ~ Boll Mi Over *I actually have a lot more experience and background in bowling, amazingly enough, than I do in arts and letters. ~ Sid Streicher
Smith  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 8:36 PM
I am bowled over by your comment .... 🎳 ...... I got the spare at least.
Hind Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 6:51 PM
very deep, I love this era, too
Smith  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 8:33 PM
Thanks Paige.
Delegans Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 6:22 PM
Very impressive! This carries a quiet, deliberate strength. The shift from old world phrasing to that raw final plea lands with a kind of honesty that only comes from real control. Well done, Alison.
Smith  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 8:32 PM
Thank you Christopher.
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