Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Spaceship -

I wish I could buy me a spaceship
  Take a trip through time and fly past the stars, the moon and the sky
  My spaceship should be bright - crystal design
  Fly silently through endless space - around all the known planets
  A giant spaceship floating in an infinite darkness
  A vessel running on principles that we do not even understand
  I know ... it's my dream and fantasy
  But I love this idea of living in my own spaceship
  But despite my dream ... I fear alien unearthly Aliens
  Never leaves my spaceship without my Stun gun - a self defense weapon
  Millions of lights are lit in the skies .... from a single source ... the sun
  I can not change the direction of my spaceship
  But I can always reach my destination - not limit myself
  Space is an inspiring concept to play with in my dreams





23.03.2014
A-L Andresen :)


Contest Name: Spaceship 
Sponsor:	Shadow Hamilton
Deadline	3/27/2014

(8th in the contest)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 6:19 PM 7 rate for the unique weaving of words and pure style vs imagery! another favorite! WOW! Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 6:37 AM - WooooW ..... HUGE HONOR !!! - Thank you, JSL !!!!

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 6:17 PM Thank you for buying me this Spaceship today! Funny thing is, We cans haves us them spaceships any time we Dream and DREAM BIG. THIS IS FAN FREAKING TASTICO!~ Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 6:35 AM - Sometime in the future ..... I come in a spaceship.. to visit you :)- We take a trip together when the moon and stars shining JSL !! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian May 23, 2014 at 3:27 PM beautiful poem, id love a space ship like dr who tardis, to travel back or forth in time, change a few things along the way make different choices. hahah dont work that way though, but one can dream thanks for all your kind comments Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2014 at 1:35 PM - In dreams, anything can happen :))) - Thank you for a nice ride along in my fantasy spaceship Diane. - enjoyable that you wanted to join me :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2014 at 1:13 PM Inspiring piece - stirs feelings to be able to move through time and space, beyond earthly limitations. Thank you for the inspiration! Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2014 at 1:20 PM - Happy that you liked this poem, Pandita :)) - - Thanks for the nice visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tyler Garlick April 5, 2014 at 1:05 PM Wow, this work leaves me wondering so many beautiful things. I loved it. I'd love to know the personal motivation behind it. Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2014 at 1:13 PM - Two boys who I know, are very concerned about spaceship :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Tyler ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2014 at 10:15 PM ANNE, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2014 at 3:16 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Linda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven March 28, 2014 at 5:37 PM Up beyond the clouds, our minds are free. Great stuff. Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 9:23 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Scott ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson March 27, 2014 at 8:51 PM We are all riding in our own spaceship's. Your's sounds lovely. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 2:37 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Robert ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Roger Horsch March 27, 2014 at 8:21 AM Such a wonderfully written poem Anne, Congrats on your win.....Hugs.....Roger Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 2:36 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings Roger :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres March 26, 2014 at 12:55 PM wolaaah!!! ...i told you ..this is a winner piece ever! .. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! .. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 1:08 PM - It was because - : your best wishes in advance AiyaH !!! - Thanks for the lovely visit and greetings my friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll March 26, 2014 at 12:20 PM A lovely cosmic write Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 12:26 PM - Thanks for the nice visit, Ken ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 26, 2014 at 5:15 AM what a grreat win, dear anne.. sweet cheers to you and huggs!.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 9:28 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

V P Mahur March 26, 2014 at 3:44 AM Dear Anne, Nice this one. It is my dream too. I really felt floating in the space. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 4:06 AM - We take a trip together when the moon and stars shining - Hope you really enjoyed it, V P :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 25, 2014 at 10:26 PM Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, anne Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 3:16 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama March 25, 2014 at 4:09 PM This is lovely. I hope you win it Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 3:15 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Funom ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton March 25, 2014 at 3:21 PM congrats on placing Anne Lise most enjoyable poem hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2014 at 3:14 AM - Thanks for my poem was chosen, Shadow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath March 25, 2014 at 12:39 PM Oh! what a beautiful line of inner spirit's conception...... "Space is an inspiring concept to play with in my dreams". You are genius in deep thought. Metaphysical philosophy, I feel here. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2014 at 12:50 PM - Thank you for a nice ride along in my fantasy spaceship bl. - enjoyable that you wanted to join me :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 25, 2014 at 8:52 AM Wild imagination rules..Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2014 at 11:57 AM - Thanks for the lovely wishes - nice with your visit Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami March 25, 2014 at 4:14 AM Super imagination dear...Yes, You can always reach your destination...All is well...Best wishes from my heart... Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2014 at 4:31 AM - Thanks for the lovely wishes - nice with your visit Sandip ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 24, 2014 at 3:40 PM Intergalactic flight through space and time captivates the imagination and excites the mind BUT if you leave my dear you will sadden your friends therefore I wish you good luck with the contest with this impressive spaceship of your poem! Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 4:48 PM - I will take all my friends with me into space :) - Thanks for the nice visit, Demetrios! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 24, 2014 at 2:57 PM enjoy the trip out of this world anne.. monday ends with huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 2:59 PM - Tuesday begins with a smile :)

Chuck Melugin March 24, 2014 at 2:23 PM Excellent, Anne-Lise! I didn't know you were an explorer! Beyond the galaxies! My best, chuck Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 2:44 PM - One can never know .......... many surprises in life :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Chuck ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charlene Mccutcheon March 24, 2014 at 10:37 AM I loved your poem and what a lovely dream. Isn't it fun to put dreams into writing. Truly 'the sky is the limit' when it comes to dreaming. Poetry is a wonderful way to condense one's thoughts and they beome.more poignant. So glad to meet you and looking forward to reading more of your poems. So glad too that you introduced yourself to me. Charlene Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 12:15 PM - Thanks for your kind visit, nice to meet you Charlene - Always enjoyable with new "poet friends" - more friends together .... even more enjoy :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres March 24, 2014 at 8:47 AM nice trip, Anne Lise... !!! this is a beautiful way to express our dreams.... and you're true.. it's not limited!!! ...I hope i'll take a ride with you one time... but I have a trip now going to universe.. lol... using my endless imagination spaceyard..lol..Have a nice day my dearest friend.. :o)) Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 9:01 AM - We take a trip together when the moon and stars shining - Hope you really enjoyed it, AiyaH :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Aiyah Torres March 24, 2014 at 8:49 AM Oopps! I forgot.. good luck in the contest.. ^__^ ...and advance.. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ^__^

Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:30 AM A brilliant write that inspires my dear friend Anne Lise. So love this gem of yours and enjoyed. Thank u so much again for sharing! Big hugs! May i also have this chance to thank u for the nice comments again on my poem. More blessings to u and have a nice day! love lots, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 4:27 AM - Thank you for a nice ride along in my spaceship Leonora - nice that you wanted to join me :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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