Spaced out thoughts

Emptiness seems paler, 
Within the wind and the movements, 
Echoes begin to creep in, 
Without a beat, beyond the warnings, 
The effervescence that once fueled my tools now sears my lungs, 
Collecting old shadows I left to rest from once upon a time, 
Colors are only a delicacy for monsters, 
And the taints in my spine are drained by dementors, 
Fallen for the light that seeps through the wooden blinds, 
Convinced, maybe this time! 
It’s only right, 
The stars can be kind, 
At times the sky speaks in tears, 
While the storm strikes the pillars of my heart with fears, 
Visions creating instruments out of casualties in my storms, 
I wonder sometimes, how much combat is left in my bones, 
Resist to insist for joy, 
Yet every step feels like a bridge I destroy, 
I’ve shown my skin and strengthened my pride, 
My words have lost their loom through the valley of my tribe, 
One day I hope I doze off and find some ease, 
For I know, no limbs of mine can do what love can please.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 7:43 AM
“Every step feels like a bridge I destroy,” For me the diamond in this platinum setting. A pleasure to read.
One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Seems like you are feeling lonely and have began to self deprecate... This is a very emotional poem and you have laid your heart out here and poured out your vulnerability.. many people will relate to your poem, especially this time of the year.. You do not write much, but whenever you do they are always heartfelt amazing poems with an great use of vocabulary... and kettles sometimes also...
Onpaper Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Good idea …. Next poem shud be abt Tom’s love for black kettles …
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December 7, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Hahah kettle had a min to weep… hahahah so happy you like this piece brothaa..thank you always for the support..
Empress Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:49 AM
Oh look at you papi writing again, hah! So good to see you post btw, and i cant help but feel the angst and despair. You must be clearly pmsing today. We need cookies and poetry session: i love the way you always express in such raw language using nature to depict innermost turmoils. I especially love th ending! Your words wil never lose their meaning, i am drooling over this line “ At times the sky speaks in tears, While the storm strikes the pillars of my heart with fears, “ wow!!!! Fave
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December 6, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Omg i almost forgot about afagatto i seriously need that!!!! Tomorrow imma have that . Lolol well i hope this bleed out helped a lil :D
Onpaper Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Ofcox I be PMSing!!!!! We need chocolates!!! N cookies papiiiiiii!!!!!! I also want affogato!!! The ones within my reach are shiiiiiit I tell you!!!
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