Space Oddity

That's Alice in Wonderland? Perhaps Alex in Wonderland? HUGS! Light & Love

are you related to Alice? in Wonderland??? LOL Light & Love Cesar!

I can really tell that you like science and i agree with the other comments. this is great writing.

was drawn to the title! Cesar! and 'holy cow!' the haiku was equal to the title! can really sail on this cool write! Jim

Love This Work of Art,C!

The free to roam, taste to the vacuum of snails, eaten on lifes velvet spoon>James

I think, no I know, you got this! You are one great poet. Thanks!

I think I got my head around the first two lines, the way quantum physicist seek a universal theory that applies to vast celestial space and tiny atoms, vacuum and snails. The velvet spoon is beyond me. If I had to guess, something I do all the time on this site, it's sort of like a baby being spoon fed these wild imaginings. The velvet would be an added feature of comfort as the baby is introduced to the oddities it has yet to encounter in it's life. My interpretation anyways. -Yoni

Very intriguing image, Cesar. The "velvet spoon" takes you on an interesting journey. Wish I could read some of you other writes, but I never learned Spanish. Perhaps it's not too late to take a course. Love, Carolyn

Interesting use of imagery and alliteration in this concise poem. I like the creative view. I see you recently joined our Soup family. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Thank you for the kind words on my poetry. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

~lol~ to commenter below! Love the velvet spoon! Yes, you make the reader so curious! Love, Shar