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Space Oddity

Universal sail Exploring vacuum and snails In my velvet spoon

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/10/2009 10:18:00 AM

That's Alice in Wonderland? Perhaps Alex in Wonderland? HUGS! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/9/2009 5:02:00 PM

are you related to Alice? in Wonderland??? LOL Light & Love Cesar!

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/3/2009 9:05:00 PM

I can really tell that you like science and i agree with the other comments. this is great writing.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/12/2009 7:14:00 PM

was drawn to the title! Cesar! and 'holy cow!' the haiku was equal to the title! can really sail on this cool write! Jim

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/5/2009 1:44:00 PM

Love This Work of Art,C!

James Fraser

Date: 6/3/2009 3:43:00 PM

The free to roam, taste to the vacuum of snails, eaten on lifes velvet spoon>James

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 6/2/2009 12:54:00 PM

I think, no I know, you got this! You are one great poet. Thanks!

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 6/1/2009 7:52:00 AM

I think I got my head around the first two lines, the way quantum physicist seek a universal theory that applies to vast celestial space and tiny atoms, vacuum and snails. The velvet spoon is beyond me. If I had to guess, something I do all the time on this site, it's sort of like a baby being spoon fed these wild imaginings. The velvet would be an added feature of comfort as the baby is introduced to the oddities it has yet to encounter in it's life. My interpretation anyways. -Yoni

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2009 6:23:00 PM

Very intriguing image, Cesar. The "velvet spoon" takes you on an interesting journey. Wish I could read some of you other writes, but I never learned Spanish. Perhaps it's not too late to take a course. Love, Carolyn

Date: 5/30/2009 8:55:00 AM

Interesting use of imagery and alliteration in this concise poem. I like the creative view. I see you recently joined our Soup family. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Thank you for the kind words on my poetry. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/29/2009 5:44:00 AM

~lol~ to commenter below! Love the velvet spoon! Yes, you make the reader so curious! Love, Shar