Debra Falgout Poet Couplet

Space

Space


A woman knows when she needs her space
Now and then, she has to embrace

The space where the mind has to go
The place where your spirit can just flow

Could be a night to put on them dancing shoes
Dance the night away, let it all loose

Could be a night for some peaceful escape
Relax to your own personal dreamscape

Whatever your space, feel the ease
Good for the soul, tension release


Written for Black Eyed Susan's Contest
                           Space
                     March 1, 2013

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Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2018 at 11:46 PM Space is important. Well expressed.

Skat A May 22, 2016 at 4:33 PM DEBRA FALGOUT, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"

Robert Pettit January 29, 2014 at 6:47 PM Nice set of rhyming couplets. Good write.

Poet Tacito March 22, 2013 at 9:00 AM A very nice Yin/Yang message here. A great blend of peace, yet living for the moment. Perhaps, just having peace is just that...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 5, 2013 at 1:42 AM Congrats on your win once more Debra luv ,oh just to dance away the tension xx

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2013 at 9:47 AM Debra, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

Terrell Martin March 2, 2013 at 12:33 PM REALLY nice poem...gotta admit the title caught my eye cuz I just finished watching the HBO series: From the Earth to the Moon (DVD set) & my mind is ALWAYS in space!@?! if ya know what I Mean & THANKS so much 4 yer comments on "If We Are All Just Dreaming and Life Has No Meaning" & yer awesome :) & keep up the GREAT poetry): Terry Thanks Again Terry): O & did I say PEACE?