Space

Our minds heavy
with worry,
make us more anxious
and uncertain about life

We become older
than we look,
and more exhausted
than we ought to be

If we let go of worry,
our minds become empty,
creating a void that makes
our minds lighter,
making us to float to any
kind of possibilities
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 1:44 AM
Congrats on your win Teddy xx
Kimathi Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Mandy, thanks for voting for me! ;)
A   Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Teddy, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD
Kimathi Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Thanks great Poet. I really appreciate it! ;)
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