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So much obscurity with no sign of light. Hope begs the question is there help in sight? Past, present, and future are mangled in time. Enters the Captain - buckle-up for flight. Across the universe, passage bought for a dime. A countdown begins; it’s the end of the line… Cashing-in what is left of my mind, Ready to reschedule this mission of mine. Envy my trip but heed the sign: The SPACE around his HEART is dark and sublime. written:02/26/13 for SPACE Contest

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Date: 3/6/2013 11:18:00 AM
Very interesting wrie. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/5/2013 1:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sm xx
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:06:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Of course, you might not have intended it as such..Don't know if the contest has closed or not..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2013 9:20:00 AM
SM, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD
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Date: 2/27/2013 2:07:00 PM
I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:17:00 AM
SM great entrée for the contest...David
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