Space

What is that word?
Give me a moment-
It's right on the tip of my tongue.
I can see it-
It starts with the letter T.
The reason for the uncertainty
Is the space between my ears.
A feeling of stupidity.
Spontaneously gone with the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Fun take on a poem about space, we either want it or not. Fun poem, Connie
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Your comment means a lot. Thank you Sheri. Warm Smiles, Connie
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March 5, 2013 at 1:38 AM
Congrats on your win Connie and i think ye jest about the space between your ears luv xx
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Thank you Mandy on your delightful comment and on the congrats. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 9:46 AM
Connie, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Linda on your much appreciated congratulation comment. Warm Smile, Connie
Guzzi Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 12:47 PM
You know, I am endlessly facinated by words, and I am always reminded..In the beginning there was the WORD and the word was God..;) Light & love
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Thanks Debbie for stopping by and for your comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Very cute...
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Donna for your much appreciated comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
Sivey Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 3:20 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend, what a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Russell for you much appreciated comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
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