Space

Space a giant divide
  Space close proximity
  Space indoors or outside
   Space between you and me
  Space  that is limitless
   Space  three dimensional
   Space at times spacious
   Space for another interval
    Space  a trip to mars
    Space an astronouts journey
    Space  the sun,the moon ,the stars
     Space  a study in astronomy
     Space that is treasured
      Space you don't want to share
       Space can be mesured
       Space in a mathmatical sense
         Cubic square



Again another poem from 2012 a little updated

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/10/2021 7:58:00 PM

I guess space is a way of marking off borders and boundaries of 'non-space.' Enjoyed your muse on 'Space,' Davie. :) gw

David Scott
Date: 6/11/2021 11:30:00 PM

Thankyou my friend not sure where was going with this an old peace trying to rework pattern wrote years ago though thougt curant situation we all in face space ect !

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/21/2021 5:39:00 AM

Nice concepts of various meaning of Space. As Andrea has already said, what fun.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/18/2021 8:15:00 AM

Wow awesome clever poetic definitions of the dimensions of space, earthly and heavenly !! Kudos for this great poem! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2021 1:34:00 PM

I enjoyed all the different ways you defined space. Fun read.

David Scott
Date: 5/9/2021 9:33:00 PM

Thankyou seems apropate at this curent time