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Melting Snowball
The technique of steadily decreasing  the number of letters or syllables per word or line, or the number of words per line. Unlimited number of lines are allowed. No meter or rhyme required.

Stretching beyond infinity, into the realm of the impossible it contains the entirety of an ever-expanding universe an empty ebony expanse, a lifeless inky vacuum an inexplicable yet omnipresent phenomenon a scientific enigma, the stuff of miracles ethereal, encompassing, supernatural space defies our ability to define it or to appreciate its complexity a non-corporeal living being or phantasmagorical force its origins a conundrum its expansion a puzzle its vastness eternal its secrets secure yet, it existed before God spoke a word. (Melting Snowball) (18 to 1 syllable) 01/13/2021 Musings on space Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 1/17/2021 8:21:00 AM
Awesome verse Emile. Astonishing and impressive. An accurate representation of our knowledge of space. :) A fav for me! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/17/2021 6:11:00 PM
Your melting snowball is a perfect form for the visual representation of our smallness compared to the vast expansion of space - just brilliant!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2021 9:45:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2021 4:46:00 AM
This is amazing... Congrats on your top win. And, God bless you friend
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2021 5:39:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thank you for participating in the contest. Congratulations on your placement!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2021 5:38:00 AM
Thanks Unseeking, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/13/2021 1:54:00 PM
Wow Emile, this is so brilliant! I hope it is a top winner for you. This form looks difficult. This is amazing! Blessings xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2021 3:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, it is so good to hear from you, I wish you and yours a better, happier, New Year my friend, Emile.

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