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Thoughts hither, slither like a snake, Thru fetid weeds to reach your lips, From there, that poison aptly drips, And mixes draughts I can't partake ... Still, farewells come as 'farewell' quips. How low you bend to tend the plants, That bloom with petals of your need - A swoony tune of won'ts and can'ts, To feed your breed of garish greed That hides a serpent's circumstance ... A goodbye sown to make me bleed. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Rhyme Time 8" Poetry Contest, Lu Loo, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/26/2020 10:40:00 PM
Excellent write, Gregory with pure poison dripping from your words. Love the internal rhyme as well, very smooth. ~ Congrats!
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:02:00 AM
Great poetry as usual, Greg. Congrats on your win! -Charlie
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Date: 2/25/2020 6:38:00 PM
Terrific write. Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 2/23/2020 10:39:00 AM
oh so soothing and beautifully expressed. Fell in love from the first 2 lines. Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for my kind placement, Lu - so appreciated to be among such wonderful writes!
Date: 2/19/2020 7:47:00 PM
Truly immense depths and power in this short but wonderfully wrought piece my friend! *You grow a flowering meadow, its deep beauty divine. *Your poetic heart a gift, true truth your verses define. * A candle you light, its glow a magnificent shower. * With flowing ink, you create sweet dessert, Light's truest power. A fav- a gem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:37:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Robert - so appreciated, Brother. :o)
Date: 2/17/2020 3:49:00 PM
Another quality draw from your classic well, I'm enjoying reading you today!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. :o)
Date: 2/17/2020 10:34:00 AM
Powerful poetry. Nice internal rhyme and alliteration.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Juliet. <3
Date: 2/16/2020 6:36:00 AM
One more bleed to remember...I like this...it says a lot...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo. :o)

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