Souvenir

honeysuckle vines
bumblebee and hummingbird 
take sweet souvenir  







20th June 2019
Sponsor	Tania Kitchin
Contest :Birds or Bees Haiku
Syllables 5 7 5 on howmanysyllables.com
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Hello Debiani Mitra, I love this poem. have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:56 PM
LOVE this. congrats on the win, Debjani
Mcgee Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:15 AM
What a lovely thought "take sweet souvenir". Congratulations on your placement Debjani.
Gilmour Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 2:52 AM
Many congrats on your beautiful win Debjani. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Lovely, Debjani. Congrats on your podium finish. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Beautiful haiku, Debjani! Congrats on your win! :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Debjani, congratulations on your bronze placement in the contest with your lovely haiku, loved that you included both birds and bees, enjoyed!
Kalyanasundaram  Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 10:04 PM
penned a good picture...Haiku lines are superb. Best Wishes.
Gauthier Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Lovely, Debjani.
Mitra Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 9:26 PM
Oh thanks for the prompt appreciation.. You made my day
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