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Spinning Swirls of razor-sharp Swords. Shiny mouth Sings Symphonies of the Sea with Salty breath. Soft pink, brown, peach--shades of Sand. Silently Sleeping as the Waves Slap it out of dreams.

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Date: 3/28/2016 11:09:00 PM
Julie Bickerton, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:55:00 AM
Julie, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2009 12:43:00 PM
Amazing use of this form and out of the last two lines I see the Shell emerging ... smile ... very well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations, Julie and I hope to read lots more of your writing.
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:46:00 PM
Simply splendid. Congratulations Julie on your alliteration being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/5/2009 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on making it to the finals! Well Done!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:02:00 AM
Julie - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:20:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:19:00 PM
Julie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:20:00 PM
Hi Julie First of all welcome to PS! Congrats on making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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