Souvenir

Spinning Swirls of razor-sharp Swords.
Shiny mouth
Sings
Symphonies of the Sea with
Salty breath.
Soft pink, brown, peach--shades of
Sand.
Silently Sleeping as the Waves
Slap it out of dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 28, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Julie Bickerton, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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August 11, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Julie, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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January 8, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Amazing use of this form and out of the last two lines I see the Shell emerging ... smile ... very well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations, Julie and I hope to read lots more of your writing.
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January 6, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Simply splendid. Congratulations Julie on your alliteration being featured. Vince
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January 5, 2009 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol
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January 4, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on making it to the finals! Well Done!! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar
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November 30, 2008 at 4:02 AM
Julie - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 9:20 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 4:19 PM
Julie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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October 27, 2008 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 27, 2008 at 3:20 PM
Hi Julie First of all welcome to PS! Congrats on making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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