Southern Nights

Fields of stars blanket warm summer skies
Songs of crickets and cicadas overwhelm the senses
In reply, fireflies dot the lawn
Full of dandelions and buttercups waiting for dawn
Far away flashes of summer heat strike with no sound 
Showing distant lands and tops of massive thunderclouds

   Soft shadows decorate the walls 
upon silent ears quiet murmurings fall
a transistor radio blares its tiny sound 
of ballgames in concrete stadiums ,
bright lights and a  pitchers mound

   Overhead fans stir dark sleepy rooms
Screened in porches give way to fleeting cool breezes
Heavy lids with dreams in flight 
Soften those warm summer nights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Deschler Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Your beautiful poem captures everything that makes the summer season so wonderful ... Excellent work Jim!
Joyce Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 3:46 PM
thank u ))))))))))
Sergi Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 3:17 PM
It's nice to know that someone can poetically describe southern nights just like Florida. my compliments, Jim!
Joyce Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 3:47 PM
much appreciated )))
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Hello Jim, your poem has made me feel like i was in this area you described.Have a nice day my friend.
Teagan Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:24 AM
What a beautiful poem! You are really good at this kind of descriptive writing. I'm in awe.
Joyce Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 12:31 PM
silly gir:)))l ..ur poems are just as descriptive as mine ..but thnx :)))
DiMino Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Beautiful poetry! Great read!
Joyce Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:57 AM
thank u very much
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 4:15 PM
One of the most interesting and well crafted poems I have read today. Wonderful, Jim. I remember a few of those southern nights and a first kiss!
Joyce Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:58 AM
mmm ...the first kiss))))..thnx for the comment
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 2:33 PM
- A beautiful picture of a lovely summer, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Joyce Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 8:06 AM
thank u anne lisa
Michael Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:42 AM
I like the imagery mood and color of this one...All the best Jim
Joyce Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 12:12 PM
thnx so much ))
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