William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Southerlies

*Image of Thunderstorms by Gifer.
southerlies

a cobweb glistens
hummingbird whorl its wings dry
~~blue clouds turning white

2020 August 16
*3rd Place*
Haiku - Nature Themed 2
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2020 August 22

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V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 2:16 AM Wonderful pleasing imagery william sir.. I enjoyed your work with lively image.:-) Congratulations on your win. Keep inspiring.Take care. Warm regards~Deepa:-) V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 6:50 AM Glad to hear a NAMASTE from you... Thankyou dear William sir. An Aloha to you:-) William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 2:25 AM 'Tis most kind of you to say, Deepa, your expressions are appreciated, namaste! William

Jan Allison August 23, 2020 at 5:14 PM super imagery william and I love the pic:-) hugs jan xx William Kelii Kekaula August 23, 2020 at 10:32 PM Heartfelt thanks, Jan, for your kind considerations, stay well, Aloha! William

Eve Roper August 22, 2020 at 8:26 PM Congratulations on your win, William, great imagery. Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2020 at 8:31 PM I am grateful, sweet Eve, for being thoughtful as always, stay well, Aloha! William

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2020 at 1:27 PM Love what you are depicting, William. You always find the greatest pics to go with your work . Congrats on your win. William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2020 at 1:30 PM Thank you, dear Andrea, your thoughts are truly welcoming as is your visits, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Tania Kitchin August 22, 2020 at 12:38 PM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku! William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2020 at 12:50 PM Many thanks, Tanya, for the opportunity, my placing and your considerations, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman August 22, 2020 at 11:54 AM Beautiful imagery of an incoming storm William. All seems normal until the clouds turn white. You do know about the wind from the trade winds in Hawaii! Congratulations on your winning placement my friend. William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2020 at 12:47 PM Greatly appreciated, Sam, yet, when our trades take a breath, the gauges nudge up and our humid weather finds us, stay well my friend, Aloha! William