South of the Sun

South of the sun
        there is a land
        which we will
   call
        home
        in 
        the 
        future
               Let the doubters beware!
       Our time is coming
          If you do not 
feel 
     that you can 
reach us with your 
    discontent and criticism
you are right
     we won't change 
because of you 
         and if you don't 
like the way we
   lay this game
                  you can 
                  let us know
   if you miss the
       mark 
with your arrows
we won't be surprised
   We are ready for
         anything
By the way
      have you seen 
the night sky recently?
  Millions of stars overhead
Shining brightly
    Our fate is beyond
your limited comprehension
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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