South of the Sun
South of the sun
there is a land
which we will
call
home
in
the
future
Let the doubters beware!
Our time is coming
If you do not
feel
that you can
reach us with your
discontent and criticism
you are right
we won't change
because of you
and if you don't
like the way we
lay this game
you can
let us know
if you miss the
mark
with your arrows
we won't be surprised
We are ready for
anything
By the way
have you seen
the night sky recently?
Millions of stars overhead
Shining brightly
Our fate is beyond
your limited comprehension
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