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South of the Border

I know the land where the lemon-trees flower, South of the border, in the Sunshine State. Where the warmth lifts up a lithesome sunflower and the sour juice cleanses my fruitful plate. The warm breezes my wan spirit seizes. The palm trees sway. I dance with them. I know the land where the lemon-trees flower, where my ivory skin tans and citrus dyes my hair, where the scent of the beaches overpower, into the loving eyes of a weeklong vacation I stare. The warm breezes my wan spirit seizes. The palm trees sway. I dance with them. Yes, I know that scented peninsula, so close to my home, that undulates like waves with gentility. The coconut beaches pound out its mighty prose and I sing with open palms, bare feet and fertility. The warm breezes my wan spirit seizes. The palm trees sway. I dance with them. 7/31/2018 Pretty Poem Please Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 8/2/2018 2:01:00 PM
Such lovely imagery in your poem, Kim. I felt the warm breezes, saw the palm trees, and smelled the lemon scent! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/2/2018 10:24:00 AM
I like the imagery you have created in your poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2018 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Julia! I enjoyed your contest!
Date: 8/2/2018 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2018 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 8/2/2018 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your well deserved win with a lovely lyric.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2018 4:25:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 7/31/2018 2:25:00 PM
Lovely verse Kim, heading there in three weeks time, bring it on. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2018 6:14:00 PM
Awesome! Enjoy!
Date: 7/31/2018 1:22:00 PM
Aww, such a lovely place you have described, I love the imagery you have put in it, it certainly seems like a perfect place, free from worries,from the worldy problems, just enjoy an enjoy with no worry, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!

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