South of the Border

I know the land where the lemon-trees flower,
South of the border, in the Sunshine State.
Where the warmth lifts up a lithesome sunflower
and the sour juice cleanses my fruitful plate.

The warm breezes
my wan spirit seizes.
The palm trees sway.
I dance with them.

I know the land where the lemon-trees flower,
where my ivory skin tans and citrus dyes my hair,
where the scent of the beaches overpower,
into the loving eyes of a weeklong vacation I stare.

The warm breezes
my wan spirit seizes.
The palm trees sway.
I dance with them.

Yes, I know that scented peninsula, so close
to my home, that undulates like waves with gentility.
The coconut beaches pound out its mighty prose
and I sing with open palms, bare feet and fertility.

The warm breezes
my wan spirit seizes.
The palm trees sway.
I dance with them.

7/31/2018
Pretty Poem Please Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Such lovely imagery in your poem, Kim. I felt the warm breezes, saw the palm trees, and smelled the lemon scent! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Ward Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:24 AM
I like the imagery you have created in your poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, Julia! I enjoyed your contest!
Gentry Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your well deserved win with a lovely lyric.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:25 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Lovely verse Kim, heading there in three weeks time, bring it on. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Awesome! Enjoy!
Ajmal Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Aww, such a lovely place you have described, I love the imagery you have put in it, it certainly seems like a perfect place, free from worries,from the worldy problems, just enjoy an enjoy with no worry, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
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