Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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South Florida -The Free Flow Style

~South Florida~
(Free  Flow ) 


The temperature is rising 

We're in the hottest days of summer 

Heat and humidity in the air are soaring 

Sometimes for days the rains are just pouring 


This is summer with all its days full of sun and fun 

People strolls the beach, and swim far beyond the sand 

Beachcombers spend there their time till the sun goes down 

Surfing and sunbathing is all a big part of their fun 


You see children running and playing 

Some are so happy building sandcastles under the sun

There are people of all ages, sexes and shapes 

Some are sitting, eating and laughing till the day is undone 


These are the hottest days of summer right  where I live here
 
Living in Florida for so many people can be a lot of fun all year.



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2005 



May.03.2016

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Gary Bateman May 4, 2016 at 12:28 PM Hello Dear "D" -- I love Florida as I used to live in Orlando for a year just after retiring from the U.S. Army in 1996. A quite enchanting and beautifully written commentary here on that wonderful state!! TR/FAV!! (Love the attached images too!!) Cheers and Best Wishes from Ingrid and me!! "G" Dorian Petersen Potter May 4, 2016 at 6:00 PM Hi again G!Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by again n' commenting so beautifully on my poem here.I'm so glad you liked this piece of mine and the pics too.I deeply appreciate you and your very kind visits, and of course the very wonderful comments you always leave me behind when you visit me.You're always kind to me,G!Thanks for your support and all.I hope that all is going well with your writes, book and in all you do.Always very busy myself here too with a lot of stuff,writing n' lots of art projects too.Sending my love n' prayers to you n' Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other now, okay, G:))Spill ink!Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you!:))D.