Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

South East Monsoon

wind swept warring deluge roars past
mighty trees bow low to its commands

splatter of rain in geometric rule
tinkling furious on glass
branch flies from parent tree

nature no slave to invitations of science
it does not have to pretend to knock at its door
rolling dark clouds,thunder, lightening are its signs
an invading torrent has rushed in to explore

obedient trees
bow low to unhindered flow...
nourished cleansed they glow

‘Four in one’ poetry contest
crystalline(8,9), Kimo (10,7,6), rhyme (12x4), haiku 5,7,5
Constance La France
written 07-September 2020

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Constance La France September 29, 2020 at 1:29 PM Krish, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance Krish Radhakrishna September 29, 2020 at 1:52 PM Constance, Thanks and honoured you Fav it!! Thanks for the competition and for designing this very unique form of presenting a theme in four different ways! Kind regards!

Rama Balasubramanian September 24, 2020 at 5:11 AM Thane Maharashtra is full of them. They are indeed beautiful. Childhood memories of train indeed memorable. I have many wonderful train memories. Thanks for your comment on my poem.

Rama Balasubramanian September 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM Perfect depiction of what I am seeing right now. Felt you are missing India from your comment on my poem. In that case just come back. Life is for living and enjoying. Take care. Warm regards, Rama Krish Radhakrishna September 24, 2020 at 2:38 AM Thanks Rama, I love India its culture, its beauty and its spirituality! I do visit India frequently but childhood memories are still vivid! Gulmohar I used to see in plenty on my train journeys!! Such a great tree!

Jan Allison September 21, 2020 at 3:05 PM beautifully observed Krish i especially like the haiku, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Krish Radhakrishna September 21, 2020 at 9:11 PM Thanks Jan! Eye witness account of this seasonal event! One of the most magnificent phenomenon!!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 7:02 AM - So much beautiful in nature ... I enjoy your contribution ... it glow of beauty, Krish :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna September 21, 2020 at 10:01 AM Thanks Anne-Lise! Happy it fetched a win! Happy you like it!:)

Belden Raiser September 8, 2020 at 7:44 AM Great Krish, I especially like the haiku. Krish Radhakrishna September 8, 2020 at 8:23 AM Thanks Belden! a very challenging format. Enjoyed composing the poem.