Souring

love’s not as it seems
gradual souring creams
flakes in the pan gleams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:23 PM
I agree with Andrea. This is a descriptive analogy.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:09 AM
An interesting metaphor, Robb.
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