Tyler Martin Poet Epulaeryu

Sour Patch Kids

First they’re sour then they’re sweet
Watermelon taste
They come in different colors
A chewy mouthful
I can eat them all
By myself
Mmm





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Inspired by Laura Mckenzie's
-Sweet Treat Contest-

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Joseph Spence Sr May 17, 2009 at 1:34 PM This is a wonderful treat. I like the flow and the tastiness of the words. I would eat them all by myself also. LOL!!! Great treat! ~Joseph

Brandee Augustus May 4, 2009 at 2:52 PM I love this. I soooooooooo agree with your choice.

Raul Moreno April 1, 2009 at 10:34 AM Nice sweet treat, definately a good one, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Daniel Neal April 1, 2009 at 12:01 AM I like eating sour patch kids too, nice topic and good luck. DN