Sour Memories

Fossilized cadavers Unable to be cremated or buried Refusing to disintegrate into oblivion

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2021 1:54:00 AM

How sad. Reminds me of a pandemic.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/3/2021 6:02:00 PM

Interesting poem this, Valsa, Epigrams like haikus and senryu, can take the imagery spirally, here i think of victims of foul play, and never to be found...Love a poem, that impacts and makes one think.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/3/2021 10:30:00 AM

The wheel of the gods grind slowly .....some fossils remain artifacts, some are converted into gems, and many are pulverised to satisfy greed or fears, but your words ring bells!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/3/2021 2:16:00 AM

Lovely. Once fossilized, it will remain like that till the end of time. A very intelligent epigram.