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What must I do to impress you my love
You are to me a lass so very fair
To see you with another man sweet dove
Now leaves me with a heart in deep despair

I wonder what he has that makes him special
Just what now in Him must you surely see
Is it just that he's a handsome vessel
Why does this bloke make your heart feel so free

I'd give all that I have to be with you
It doesn't seem to me to be quite fair
Why can't I seem to find a love that's true
Why does false hope now seem to be my snare

You now mean more to me then life it seem
But all I have of you is in my dreams

8/31/18
For the Sour Grapes Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:49 PM
I love the emotion you convey in this poem of hopeless ardour Charles. A very moving poem. : )
Reese Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 11:41 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Negativity is not in my poems most of the time.
Duet Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 11:49 PM
What a sad but sweet poem, Charles.
Reese Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Didn't think I could be sour but the poem just came to me.
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