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Sour Grapes

My Tribute To: A Loser Cometh hither and drink my sour grapes for it was you that spoiled the taste with haste You took your sweet wine from vagrant apes who can't tell cheap from good oh what a waste Each night you went to the bar and got drunk spend every dollar we had on cheap wine You came home smelling like a pissing skunk down in the cellar you went there you pined I took my case and ran away from home to my mother who loved me from the start I left you penniless, drunk, and alone and I did this because you ripped my art... Cometh hither and drink your cheep red wine thanks to you, I lost a fardel of time. August 27, 2018

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Date: 8/29/2018 8:41:00 PM
Your tell a sad tale here - I hope it fiction. What does fardel mean? Moving... Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/2/2018 3:53:00 PM
Fardel means a bundle, of something, its old English
Date: 8/29/2018 8:45:00 AM
A strong message in poetic form... well-crafted Pixie...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/27/2018 3:28:00 PM
Fantastic, very loud and understood. Some people just don't get it. They have a good life and piss it away...just like a skunk. I could feel the emotions and the anger and the pain in this completely.
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Date: 8/27/2018 2:33:00 PM
Wow! Sour grapes!
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:47:00 PM
pixie, this is a daunting read especially the fourth line... he'd better back off!...huggs
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Date: 8/27/2018 6:54:00 AM
he sure was a loser Pixie , loved the pissed skunk line - that is so descriptive!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2018 6:43:00 AM
He deserved it..a story well told my friend..you excel in every form..magic in your words, Pixie.
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