Premiere Contest WinnerSour Apple

After forestalling, the tree of life fell.
sending a sour apple straight to hell.

7/17/2018

Shaw’s Life or Death Epigram Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Arowolo Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Nice one,kim...Congrats on your superb win...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Thank you, Olusegun
Arowolo Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Nice one,kim...Congrats on your superb win...
Waters Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:42 AM
clever - congrats on top win
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:42 AM
Thanks, Virginia!
Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Faulkner Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Congrats, Kim, for your well-deserved win!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Pett Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim with your cleverly written epigram. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Bravo. Congrats, Kim, for a wonderful gold medal win.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Line!
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim.. I wouldn't want that on My stone ... Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Me neither! Thanks, Eve! Hugs!
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Powerful and right to the point, Kim. Congrats on your Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thank you with a hug! :)
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July 31, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Lol! Awesome :)) Congrats on a fab win! xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 2:24 PM
A fruity little number that packs a punch Kim, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Faulkner Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 1:41 PM
I actually like a nice tart sour apple sometimes, good luck in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Michael Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:21 PM
May that sour apple burn forever more... Nice one kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thanks, Arturo!
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