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Soups Only For the Poor

Soup is only for the poor
But seriously I want more
If only I could drink the broth
I would kill an animal, maybe a moth
I need a spoon to eat this junk
I'm in a boat, a shark hit it, now i'm sunk
I'm living on the side of the road
But I've got soup, it's not too cold
Even though it's winter
I wish I could use a dang fork
Possibly even kill someone in new york
Soup should only be given to the poor
Maybe, soon, I might score
Hopefully
Then again, I live on the street 
I'm always getting beat up, always beat
That's why I need soup
Because it's for the poor.

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Skat A February 1, 2016 at 5:52 PM Sloppy Joe,:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Gordon Mcconnell February 1, 2016 at 2:24 PM Real fun piece Sloppy Joe, like your rhyme and nice storyline, well penned!

Pandita Sietesantos November 20, 2015 at 11:34 PM Hi Sloppy Joe, I am a soup lover too! But I enjoyed rading this excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita Sloppy Joe November 22, 2015 at 6:03 PM Thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2015 at 9:44 PM I must be very poor, cuz I love my soup. Joe, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Sloppy Joe November 22, 2015 at 6:03 PM Thank you :)

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 9:16 AM Interesting poem to post, better yet...what a name... Sloppy Joe,, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT