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Hot, fulfilling
Vegetable’s swimming 
Stream encircling my face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Callus Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Lovely poem with a great final line! / paul
Christian Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 4:54 AM
beautiful featured poem
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 5:24 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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