Soup

I’m playing in the garden making caterpillar soup
I squish them with a stick to make a caterpillar gloop
Mix it with some water and then stir till there’s a froth
Then I drink it from a jam jar, lovely caterpillar broth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration John. I am going to put on a pot of chicken soup to help you recover from that goop you made. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2010 at 12:14 AM
very clever
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