Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Imagism

Sounds Over the Silence

Singing is one among my favorite hobbies...
'Cause it makes me feel free and oh so happy

One evening, inside this huge darkened room 
Peeking all around to see no one but only me
So, I take my bottled water so gladly
I begin to sing a love song of famous Whitney
I close my eyes burying myself deep to the melody
Sometimes lifting my arms... also, giving a sway
I sang the song on the top of my lungs
Feelings so high... so dandy and so young

Finishing the song
With eyes closed
Smile on my face
With one hand, up in the air...

then suddenly over the silence...

A whistle
then hand-claps from somewhere...

BY
olive_eloi
1:02 pm
03/30/ 2014
------------------------------------------------ giggles of the remembrance.. :D!

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Emer Capate June 29, 2014 at 7:13 AM hello olive, the poem seems familiar to me the feelings, i mean. this is emer capate who wrote the poem LABORIOUS HANDS. Thanks for ur comments as well. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 1, 2014 at 6:00 PM No problems..:)

Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2014 at 9:02 AM I am sure it was a magnificent performance, so glad someone was able to witness it. I really enjoyed your story. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 30, 2014 at 3:25 PM hahaha.. :D?! i think so cause after that incident i was asked to render a song for some program.. :) to God be the glory.. :)

Paul Callus March 30, 2014 at 7:03 AM This is what I mean....so simply expressed...and then you finish it off to a grand finale :) won't whistle...but I'll clap...brava :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 30, 2014 at 3:26 PM thanks Paul for the visit.. :) hope you had a happy day.. :)