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Sounds of Something

Sounds of something somewhere sound so absurd Silence in the section of the unspoken spoken word Seriously over sensitive a silver screen scene everyday Study the students social scale to see who actually stays Separating the subpar scores standardizing who to select Sensitivity can be sabotage so smile wide to all suspects Saliva slips sliding out the mouth down to a slippery chin Second place with so so skills so step it up so you can win Sounds of something like this sheet still sound so absurd Silence in this sections stanza of simple unspoken words bmdavey@11/22/17

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Date: 11/25/2017 1:33:00 PM
Simply superb alliteration - the third stanza especially hits home hard as I worked in a school for 16 years and I've seen it happen first hand:-) hugs jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/25/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Jan like I told Andrea it was a little different for me but I am trying to be more versatile, thank you as always
Date: 11/23/2017 3:49:00 PM
This was a fascination read focusing my attention on the SOUNDS. I really liked how you did the saliva line!!
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/23/2017 4:58:00 PM
It was different for me to write that's for sure, I am trying to broaden my horizons and become more versatile in my art just like you my friend

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