Brian Davey Poet Alliteration

Sounds of Something

Sounds of something somewhere sound so absurd
    Silence in the section of the unspoken spoken word

    Seriously over sensitive a silver screen scene everyday
       Study the students social scale to see who actually stays

    Separating the subpar scores standardizing who to select
      Sensitivity can be sabotage so smile wide to all suspects

    Saliva slips sliding out the mouth down to a slippery chin
      Second place with so so skills so step it up so you can win

    Sounds of something  like this sheet still sound so absurd
      Silence in this sections stanza of simple unspoken words



                                             bmdavey@11/22/17

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Jan Allison November 25, 2017 at 1:33 PM Simply superb alliteration - the third stanza especially hits home hard as I worked in a school for 16 years and I've seen it happen first hand:-) hugs jan xx Brian Davey November 25, 2017 at 1:43 PM Thank you Jan like I told Andrea it was a little different for me but I am trying to be more versatile, thank you as always

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2017 at 3:49 PM This was a fascination read focusing my attention on the SOUNDS. I really liked how you did the saliva line!! Brian Davey November 23, 2017 at 4:58 PM It was different for me to write that's for sure, I am trying to broaden my horizons and become more versatile in my art just like you my friend