Sounds

Patter bubble gum,
Bang a blow from the mouth blow.
A harlot patter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 6:04 PM
soup mail...
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 11:36 PM
Love that middle line of it. Bang a blow, now that is a unique way to say it!
Anglesey Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Picturing an illmannered woman smacking her gum and popping loud bubbles. Perfect imagery and very imaginative :)
A   Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Hello OA., lol,,,, i hate the sound of bubble gum smacking... but i love the sound of it when it pops... especially when it splatters all over the face... enjoyed~ Linda
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