Sounds

Fake locations fake bread you brake daily tryin to escape your true path of hatred I like you better when you are only you naked with with your blunt words don't hide behind the white sheets in Georgia I will find you and place storms there.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/6/2025 5:40:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:25:00 AM

James, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 1:40:00 PM

James, Awesome write, Thank You for sharing... SKAT...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2009 5:15:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 4:59:00 AM

This is an interesting write here. I could go several different ways here. Keep writing. Sara