Sounds

Fake locations
fake bread you brake daily
tryin
 to escape your true path of hatred
 
I like you better when you are only you
naked with with your blunt words
don't hide behind the white sheets in Georgia
I will find you and place storms there.

anniversaryi do not know?

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Beata Agustin

January 6, 2025 at 5:40 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.

Poet Destroyer A

March 12, 2016 at 9:25 AM

James, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

January 18, 2016 at 1:40 PM

James, Awesome write, Thank You for sharing... SKAT...

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 4, 2009 at 5:15 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol