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Soundly Asleep

~ Drenched in a dream bringing life to your smile Restful endeavors as night comes to call Slumbering deep beneath flannelled intentions Hugging my pillow in spite of it all Reaching for shadows that follow a moonbeam Lost in your arms as my heart skips a beat Seeking your lips for their warmth I am craving Finding the taste so invitingly sweet Hearing your voice ‘cross a valley of echoes Singing along with the love that I feel Melodies ring of an enchanted vision Sensual harmonies found to reveal Come to me now as the stars start to glisten Whisper your passion my soul longs to keep Make me your own in the throes of affection Take me tonight as I’m soundly asleep ~

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Date: 2/24/2020 11:49:00 AM
I love, love these romantic writes of yours Chris, you are a true master of the language of love. Well penned my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, what a nice thing to say. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 2/21/2020 12:45:00 PM
A pure delight to read this morning Chris. I love this romantic poem, especially how your ended it in your last stanza. Bravo! xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2020 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Connie, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 2/21/2020 10:07:00 AM
I love how you rhyme so smoothly in this poems.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Alison
Date: 2/20/2020 3:26:00 PM
Another gem Chris. Thoroughly enjoyable read my friend. Hope all is well. Best...Ron
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 2/20/2020 1:34:00 PM
- A beautiful and romantic cradle song, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 2/20/2020 1:06:00 PM
A beautiful escape in this poem today. Well written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2020 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 2/19/2020 9:11:00 PM
From first to last line, a lot of fun!...beneath flanneled intentions, shadows that follow a moonbeam
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Chris Green
Date: 2/20/2020 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 2/19/2020 7:34:00 PM
wow...I hope all your wishes and dreams are fulfilled Chris... this is beautiful, almost seductive and alluring... I don't know what you are having to achieve dreams like this but make mine a double.. lol... anyway, gorgeous write my friend! may all your dreams be the sweetest...
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Chris Green
Date: 2/20/2020 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. At least I can count on you to stop by to read my poems. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 2/19/2020 5:24:00 PM
Me also:) Good night!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/20/2020 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Daniel.

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