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Sound of You Writing

I hear you writing a sad poem
while your breaking this my old heart
all this wealth from your repertoire
while my pathetic mind feeds you.

© Harry J Horsman  2013

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Dr.Ram Mehta

January 3, 2015 at 10:34 AM

Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Harry

Kayod5 Kayode

January 3, 2015 at 2:09 AM

Congrats on your fine win Harry... huggs

Poet Destroyer A

January 2, 2015 at 11:32 PM

HARRY, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2015 at 10:26 PM

0h my, what a sad one for the jealousy contest. I really enjoy seeing this golden oldie again. Congrats, my dear friend.

Jan Allison

January 2, 2015 at 3:23 PM

i found this poem and its imagery so sad Harry - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Verlena S. Walker

January 2, 2015 at 2:57 PM

As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 5, 2013 at 11:04 AM

Hi Harry! That thought, "the sound of you writing" just gripped me-- so much that could be read into these lines-- making me think, I really like this... of how it makes me ponder and relate...I hope all is well with you!

Victoria Anderson-Throop

April 2, 2013 at 9:49 AM

there is a sweet yearning in this piece that touches me deeply across the miles...and of course, that mind of yours may feel pathetic, but it is not....love, Victoria

James Peranteau

March 28, 2013 at 3:43 PM

Great Grook dear poet! And if i read you right(write), my friend, your insight on the form of Grook intensified this write ! A fantastic decision on reading this poetry sir. Have a wonderful Spring....much love, james

Audrey Haick

March 27, 2013 at 8:13 PM

This is a good kind of hurt, Harry. Love really does hurt, and it's worth it..when our love ones hurt, we hurt... As it should be.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 27, 2013 at 7:58 AM

Sad but good my friend .. like it xx

Opondi Ougo

March 27, 2013 at 5:30 AM

sweetly sad..i love it :-)

Deborah Burch

March 27, 2013 at 4:07 AM

How creative! You made it look so easy to write a Grook and poetic on top of that!! My blonde brain can't seem to grasp the pen!;) well done 'arry. Live ya Deb. winning wishes.