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Sound of You Writing

I hear you writing a sad poem while your breaking this my old heart all this wealth from your repertoire while my pathetic mind feeds you. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2015 10:34:00 AM

Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Harry

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/3/2015 2:09:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win Harry... huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:32:00 PM

HARRY, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 10:26:00 PM

0h my, what a sad one for the jealousy contest. I really enjoy seeing this golden oldie again. Congrats, my dear friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 3:23:00 PM

i found this poem and its imagery so sad Harry - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/2/2015 2:57:00 PM

As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/5/2013 11:04:00 AM

Hi Harry! That thought, "the sound of you writing" just gripped me-- so much that could be read into these lines-- making me think, I really like this... of how it makes me ponder and relate...I hope all is well with you!

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 4/2/2013 9:49:00 AM

there is a sweet yearning in this piece that touches me deeply across the miles...and of course, that mind of yours may feel pathetic, but it is not....love, Victoria

James Peranteau

Date: 3/28/2013 3:43:00 PM

Great Grook dear poet! And if i read you right(write), my friend, your insight on the form of Grook intensified this write ! A fantastic decision on reading this poetry sir. Have a wonderful Spring....much love, james

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2013 8:13:00 PM

This is a good kind of hurt, Harry. Love really does hurt, and it's worth it..when our love ones hurt, we hurt... As it should be.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/27/2013 7:58:00 AM

Sad but good my friend .. like it xx

Opondi Ougo

Date: 3/27/2013 5:30:00 AM

sweetly sad..i love it :-)

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/27/2013 4:07:00 AM

How creative! You made it look so easy to write a Grook and poetic on top of that!! My blonde brain can't seem to grasp the pen!;) well done 'arry. Live ya Deb. winning wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2013 11:58:00 PM

ahhh, a sad grook. ME LIKES< Harry.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/26/2013 9:39:00 PM

Harry...this is so beautiful! So expressive and beautiful. I'm sure if she knew...some of her sadness would disappear.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/26/2013 12:33:00 PM

Very nice Grook poem here Harry.Liked it.Best wishes to you.