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Sound, Hues and Juice

a gentle breeze tinkling wind chimes her voice reflected within her eyes the sky sunlight gleams upon the stream her flowing hair rose petals blushing cheeks and lips slithering down her neck peach juice and kisses - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - POTD ~ 5th December 2016

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John Michaels

Date: 4/15/2017 8:05:00 AM

Wow - amazing write, Paul. Fantastic images and I loved the way you blended 5(!) Haiku together to make one cohesive whole. And a well-deserved PotD as well. Massive congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2017 12:13:00 PM

Your meaningful feedback is appreciated, John...thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2016 2:11:00 PM

CAme back to your beautiful poetry to say MERRY CHRISTMAS, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2016 7:59:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I hope you're enjoying this festive season. Regards // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2016 10:55:00 AM

Very nice use of the haiku form, very romantically sensual. Worthy of POTD congrats to you Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2016 11:17:00 AM

Thank you, John; your comments and support are appreciated. Best regards // paul

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/18/2016 9:34:00 PM

Hello Paul, Sorry I missed this gem earlier. Congratulations on POTD!! You are the "Accomplished Haiku Master" here for sure. (I like you use of "slithering" in the final Haiku -- what an effect!!) A FAV!! Merry Christmas, Gary

Paul Callus
Date: 12/19/2016 4:23:00 AM

Thank you for your generous comments, Gary; the fav is much appreciated. May you and Ingrid enjoy this special time of the year! Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/12/2016 4:21:00 AM

A gorgeous haiku, Paul. Kudos for POTD! Well deserved honor, my poetic friend. This poem is very, very sensual and so romantic. Elegant and visually stunning. Great poem. Love and peace to you.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Freddie. I still have much to improve on my haiku, but will get there, eventually! Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/10/2016 6:59:00 PM

I enjoyed reading these again.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/11/2016 2:48:00 PM

Thank you for a repeat visit, Richard. Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/8/2016 12:28:00 AM

Excellent write. Congrats on your POTD honors. Tanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/8/2016 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Ravi. Regards // paul

Paloma P

Date: 12/6/2016 10:50:00 AM

Oh that last last, a gentle shiver! :) Congrats Paul.

Paloma P
Date: 12/6/2016 7:47:00 PM

Indubitably, apparently I was so flustered, I stuttered. :) Good to be back and read you Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/6/2016 4:58:00 PM

Pleased to see you back in action, Paloma! Hope all is well on the western front:) Glad that the end haiku attracted your attention:) Regards // paul

Ironic Zink

Date: 12/6/2016 12:45:00 AM

Nice work And well earned POTD!!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/6/2016 4:21:00 PM

Thank you! Pleased to have you reading my work. Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 12/6/2016 12:03:00 AM

Very lovely Paul. Beautiful Haikus. Congrats. God Bless and a seven from me. JB

Paul Callus
Date: 12/6/2016 4:19:00 PM

Many thanks, Judy; regards and blessings. // paul

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 12/5/2016 8:44:00 PM

Lovely poem.... Congrats on being selected.....

Paul Callus
Date: 12/6/2016 3:47:00 PM

Thank you, Bernard. Pleased to have you stopping by. Regards // paul

Raven Howell

Date: 12/5/2016 8:19:00 PM

Wonderful poem! Thanks!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/6/2016 3:44:00 PM

Thank you for your reaction, Raven! Pleased to make your acquaintance. // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/5/2016 10:55:00 AM

Lovely thoughts Paul, congratulations for POTD honors...

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 3:24:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. Best regards...paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/5/2016 9:37:00 AM

Back to say congratulations Paul for this wonderful POTD:)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 3:22:00 PM

Thank you for a second visit, Daniel, and the congrats. Regards // paul

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/5/2016 9:20:00 AM

Very enchanting. Congratulations Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 3:20:00 PM

Pleased that you liked these haiku, Akkina:) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/5/2016 7:46:00 AM

Hi Paul, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 8:20:00 AM

I appreciate you coming back with congrats, Alexis:) Thank you! Have a nice day. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2016 7:39:00 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 8:17:00 AM

Ah! You're back again, Anne-Lise:) Thank you! Hugs // paul

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/5/2016 6:53:00 AM

Back with congrats on POTD.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 8:15:00 AM

Thank you for revisiting, and the congrats, Agnes. Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/5/2016 6:32:00 AM

Excellent. Very beautiful imagery write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Ravi. Regards // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2016 10:10:00 PM

Such a very wonderful chain of haiku my dear friend, Paul! A 7. Have a wonderful new week! Hugs! love lots, Leonora

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Leonora; a pleasure to have you stopping by:) May you too have a lovely new week. Love & Hugs // paul

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/4/2016 9:11:00 PM

A bliss , a bliss ... the haiku string says this ...

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2016 7:21:00 AM

Thank you for your generosity, Probir:) Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/4/2016 11:15:00 AM

what a beautiful 'ku with a tactile feel to it, paul... love this!..huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 12/4/2016 3:13:00 PM

Thank you for the complimentary comments, Nette:) hugs // paul

Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/4/2016 9:41:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/4/2016 11:05:00 AM

Pleased you enjoyed, Ralph; also pleased that you stopped by. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2016 7:48:00 AM

These are lovely images Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/4/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thanks for liking, Richard. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/3/2016 10:14:00 PM

The title was so soothing, the poem a delight to read! :) Hope all is well with you!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/4/2016 10:37:00 AM

Pleased with your 'delightful' comments, Arthur:) Am getting back slowly into my normal routine after catching one cold on top of another. Regards // paul