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soul's whisper

i stand beneath the moon attempting to admire its beauty; it's as full as my mind with thoughts of you i feel the breath of wind a tender, welcomed touch against my almost bare flesh it arouses me as shadows touch like lips reaching towards that first kiss the gleam of a thousand stars become your eyes reflecting back at me passion’s flame ignites i can hear its thunder loud, like a summer's storm your inner soul shines like lightning across the sky i arch my back and cherish the warmth as the wind caresses me and feel the rain of affection pouring down on me soothing me i am refreshed as i marvel in the beauty of our relationship love full bloom yet i struggle like the moon between clouds yearning to understand the abomination of others and scorn their darkness with the beauty of your light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 9/29/2019 8:01:00 PM
This is beautiful!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 8:05:00 PM
thank you....written so long ago, i almost forgot it existed until you commented on it... :) hugs
Date: 11/29/2012 4:21:00 AM
Wow what an enchanting read with powerful use of language!
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Date: 11/18/2012 9:29:00 AM
A great combination of quiet words expressed with such clarity and emotion. Simply gorgeous.
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Date: 11/17/2012 6:59:00 AM
Sandra--very cool. This is a pleasure to read because the image is a lot of fun. The idea of a full moon and full mind is very appealing to me. Shall we say it tickles my brain? Thank you for your kind comment the other day. Very kind!
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Date: 11/16/2012 8:34:00 AM
this is lovely Sandra, you truly are a wonderful poet!!!!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 4:47:00 PM
wow, a FAVE!!!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 1:44:00 PM
Wooow Sandra, it is beautifully !!!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
Absolutely stunning work! Quite enjoyed this! Thanks for lookin at my shtuufs ^^ Always, laura
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Date: 11/14/2012 1:01:00 PM
Sandra, wow.... some whisper.... xox~pd
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