Soul's Whisper

i stand beneath the moon
attempting to admire its beauty;
it's as full as my mind
with thoughts of you
i feel the breath of wind
a tender, welcomed touch
against my almost bare flesh
it arouses me
as shadows touch
like lips reaching
towards that first kiss
the gleam of a thousand stars
become your eyes
reflecting back at me

passion’s flame ignites
i can hear its thunder 
loud, like a summer's storm 
your inner soul shines 
like lightning across the sky 
i arch my back 
and cherish the warmth
as the wind caresses me 
and feel the rain of affection 
pouring down on me 
soothing me 
i am refreshed 
as i marvel in the beauty
of our relationship 
love full bloom

yet i struggle
like the moon
between clouds
yearning to understand
the abomination
of others
and scorn their darkness
with the beauty of your light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/29/2019 8:01:00 PM
This is beautiful!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 8:05:00 PM
thank you....written so long ago, i almost forgot it existed until you commented on it... :) hugs
Date: 11/29/2012 4:21:00 AM
Wow what an enchanting read with powerful use of language!
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Date: 11/18/2012 9:29:00 AM
A great combination of quiet words expressed with such clarity and emotion. Simply gorgeous.
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Date: 11/17/2012 6:59:00 AM
Sandra--very cool. This is a pleasure to read because the image is a lot of fun. The idea of a full moon and full mind is very appealing to me. Shall we say it tickles my brain? Thank you for your kind comment the other day. Very kind!
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Date: 11/16/2012 8:34:00 AM
this is lovely Sandra, you truly are a wonderful poet!!!!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 4:47:00 PM
wow, a FAVE!!!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 1:44:00 PM
Wooow Sandra, it is beautifully !!!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
Absolutely stunning work! Quite enjoyed this! Thanks for lookin at my shtuufs ^^ Always, laura
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Date: 11/14/2012 1:01:00 PM
Sandra, wow.... some whisper.... xox~pd
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