Soul's Cry

In the depths of her eyes,  
I found a world untold,  
Secrets swirling like eddies.  
In a river of gold.  

Eyes, they say, are windows.  
To the soul's inner lore,  
And as I gazed into hers,  
I felt my own heart soar.  

At first, I saw happiness,  
Hope sparkling bright and clear,  
But soon, the light dimmed,  
As shadows drew near.  

Her eyes, once full of life,  
Now held a darker truth,  
A story of pain and strife,  
Hidden in her youth.  

Tears etched lines of sorrow,  
Scars marked her fragile frame,  
And in her eyes, I saw.  
The weight of untold shame.  

I watched her story unfold,  
A tale of broken dreams,  
Of innocence lost,  
In life's relentless streams.  

She fought battles unseen,  
Her soul a battlefield,  
Struggling to find peace.  
Amidst wounds never healed.  

In her eyes, I glimpsed.  
The depths of her despair,  
A darkness consuming her,  
Leaving her soul laid bare.  

As I stood witness to her pain,  
I questioned why I dared.  
To peer into her soul,  
To uncover secrets bared.  

But in the end, I realized.  
The truth that lay within:  
The girl whose eyes I gazed into  
Was a reflection of my own sin.  

For the darkness I saw in her eyes  
Was a mirror to my own strife,  
And in her final breath, I knew.  
The girl whose soul I saw was me, my life.

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Date: 3/19/2024 4:07:00 AM
Powerful write with awesome imagery. I really loved this poem of yours, Rosetta:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 3/19/2024 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win. A poem that is worthy of a top win.
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