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With a calm soothing look from your blue eyes
You invite me in to refresh my worth
And heal my wounds with your appealing mirth
A kiss from your lips leaves me satisfied
To desire no more, just be by your side
Tease my cheek with your feathery soft flirt
And I'll tie off my vessel at your berth
While your waves of kindness restore my pride
We'll take a walk on the beach holding hearts
Take a swim in the waters of desire
Drying our bare souls in the bright sun light
Never again will we let our paths part
Climbing love's mountain higher and higher
Then down the backside, to walk out of sight

  an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 8/10/2016 5:34:00 PM
Daniel, I really like this. I like the fresh imagery, I like the rhyme. Most of all, I like the message, which is beautifully ended with "to walk out of sight." Thank you for sharing this wonderful, touching poem.
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:21:00 PM
Daniel, Congratulations on the win. Stop and enjoy my blog "Peace is a Fugitive." SKAT LOVE
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Date: 3/4/2016 4:04:00 PM
Lovely! Daniel, I love the beautiful imagery contained in 'We'll take a walk on the beach holding hearts'.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/4/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I'm really glad you dropped in to read and I really appreciate the kind remarks.Peace :)
Date: 3/4/2016 6:43:00 AM
Another very beautiful sonnet, Daniel. A7. T.J
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Date: 3/4/2016 7:02:00 AM
Thanks again, TJ . I am aware of your expertise of sonnets and I value your opinion immensely . Take care my friend. Peace to you and your family:)
Date: 3/3/2016 4:44:00 PM
Wow! You old dog you!! Naughty but nice.
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Date: 3/3/2016 6:07:00 PM
In that case, can't wait for the no holes barred version .
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2016 5:13:00 PM
I thought I was being rather reserved, but am happy you enjoyed it. Always nice to see your beautiful smile. Thanks for the visit. Peace dear friend:)
Date: 3/3/2016 2:08:00 PM
Wow! If you keep writing like that we're going to have to change your name to Cupid! You're getting amazingly good at this! A 7/fav for sure!
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Date: 3/3/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thank you my dear Jeannie. You have made me smile. I always enjoy your friendly visits. Peace my dear friend:)
Date: 3/3/2016 1:23:00 PM
Very romantic my it
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Date: 3/3/2016 1:26:00 PM
Touche'. Thank you my friend. Having another good day. I appreciate your kindness and always have fun when you visit. Peace my friend:)