Soulmate

If you would ask, I would say I need you more every day Cause you shine the light, on the darkest parts of my soul Without you, I'm out of control You keep the demons at bay With you I can slay, any dragons or windmills that get in our path You're my high-ground to stand A safe place to land The perfect shelter, through any storm You don't save me from the world You save the world from me Cause baby, you're the better side of me

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Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:51:00 PM

HI RACHEL, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

Rachel Tate
Date: 8/18/2013 10:38:00 AM

thank you. I was pretty stoked about it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:00:00 PM

Rachel, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA ...

Rachel Tate
Date: 8/18/2013 10:40:00 AM

as always, thank you. and I know I keep saying this but its because I mean it, your support means a lot to me :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/14/2013 3:38:00 PM

Really good poem, Rachel! I enjoyed it, and I can relate to this completely. I have also written a poem titled, "Soul Mate". Please, read it sometime.

Rachel Tate
Date: 8/18/2013 10:41:00 AM

thank you for taking the time to read and review and i'd be more than happy to take a look at your poem :)

Skat A

Date: 8/9/2013 7:58:00 PM

a nice win Rachel... enjoyed every entry on the winning list... congratulations in "The Highlander contest" ~ SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2013 5:13:00 PM

I think it would be awesome to have a soulmate. You must be a very lucky lady!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2013 10:12:00 PM

Hello Rachel, . CONGRATULATIONS!!! ---- in Nathan's "There can be only one" contest... xox...Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2013 10:04:00 AM

- Hello new member: Rachel. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rachel Tate
Date: 7/30/2013 12:37:00 PM

thank you so much for your support. being new to the site i've found a really great crowd here and i'm having a blast :)

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2013 8:37:00 PM

Rachel,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Rachel, for the lovely comment. Please stop by my work anytime, you post a new poem. I'm going to enjoy following your poetry. I do hope you enjoy all the poets here... we are like family.... with all the goods and bads... take care... your new poetry soup friend.. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 12:55:00 PM

Hi Rachel, wow! I think we are all entitled to call one person our soul-mate. okay maybe 2 (jk) I have this one special man in my life. he makes me feel, as if his arms are my safe landing. He is my high ground to stand. a lovely way of introducing your first poem. hope others stop by to read your first poem on the soup. please continue to post, and enjoy this site... luv~ Linda