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Soul Wounds

soul wounds scars fails to form pain seems to be the norm storm after storm happiness in the eyes when hope shies from its weak tries they said the sun never lies .. and how many times it shun just for fun hurt fills the blood vintage wine the more the time, like old open wounds from time to time it erupts and flood what's done is done you get used to serving the same piece of your flesh well done deeper said the wound to the dagger ... and the word i love you sounds madder hope rise and sets this is as merciful as it gets c'est la vie what will be... will be sane as with the pain pain as sadness could behave a little insane make it rain curtain the name drop the blame hide the gut shame conceal the feel today's real is tomorrow's surreal feeling the stab is the best rehab smile to the mirror it's been a while cryptic smile tamer ?

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Date: 5/2/2023 2:29:00 AM
Well, this poem is really depressing. If this is your reality, I encourage you to look in the mirror and tell yourself, "I am great, and I deserve love." If you are talking about someone that is not you, then take that hurting person out for pizza or shopping, or to the batting cages. Anyways good poem, that yes I still call depressing.
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Date: 10/18/2023 2:21:00 AM
I'm sad it had a negative impression on you

Book: Shattered Sighs