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Soul Window

hard man needs to heal open soul window reveals closed fist can not give nor can it receive rise wise like smoke embracing spiritual goals green

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/2/2024 9:54:00 PM

Giving and receiving are lessons in humility. I enjoy this senryu.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/3/2024 12:35:00 AM

Hilda I appreciate you reading and your comment! Thank you!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/31/2024 8:50:00 PM

You showcase your wisdom here about life that I really appreciate. It is almost like instead of the person having a door there’s a cement wall. You can scream all you want, but they cannot hear you. Maybe they don’t wanna hear you don’t want any contribution to their life so Soul window is a perfect title and a perfect poem. Pangie xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/1/2024 1:36:00 PM

Now, now…you deserve it, please gave a super day,AND, you are most welcome! Pangie xx

Karen Jones
Date: 7/31/2024 10:01:00 PM

Wow what a nice comment Pangie thank you so much for your support and insight.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/31/2024 7:12:00 AM

So true, and such a deep write this is dear karen couldnt have said it any better; i love how youv written especially the opening lines, violence anger and negativity isnt the way and so many men need healing, humankind. Brilliant and you are not redundant at all! I read you now and see you write on so many various things; you are such a gifted soul. Keep sharing and writing kind soul

Karen Jones
Date: 7/31/2024 7:41:00 AM

You are such a sweet soul thank you for being exactly who you are Ink Empress!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/30/2024 12:12:00 PM

Interesting- "rise wise like smoke embracing" intriguing

Karen Jones
Date: 7/30/2024 12:18:00 PM

Thanks!