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Soul Window

hard man needs to heal
open soul window reveals
closed fist can not give

nor can it receive 
rise wise like smoke embracing
spiritual goals green

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Hilda Greenhough

August 2, 2024 at 9:54 PM

Giving and receiving are lessons in humility. I enjoy this senryu.

Karen Jones

August 3, 2024 at 12:35 AM

Hilda I appreciate you reading and your comment! Thank you!

Panagiota Romios

July 31, 2024 at 8:50 PM

You showcase your wisdom here about life that I really appreciate. It is almost like instead of the person having a door there’s a cement wall. You can scream all you want, but they cannot hear you. Maybe they don’t wanna hear you don’t want any contribution to their life so Soul window is a perfect title and a perfect poem. Pangie xx

Panagiota Romios

August 1, 2024 at 1:36 PM

Now, now…you deserve it, please gave a super day,AND, you are most welcome! Pangie xx

Karen Jones

July 31, 2024 at 10:01 PM

Wow what a nice comment Pangie thank you so much for your support and insight.

Ink Empress

July 31, 2024 at 7:12 AM

So true, and such a deep write this is dear karen couldnt have said it any better; i love how youv written especially the opening lines, violence anger and negativity isnt the way and so many men need healing, humankind. Brilliant and you are not redundant at all! I read you now and see you write on so many various things; you are such a gifted soul. Keep sharing and writing kind soul

Karen Jones

July 31, 2024 at 7:41 AM

You are such a sweet soul thank you for being exactly who you are Ink Empress!