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soul surrender

layers of smudged colours were dripping with rain bowed to sunshine and did not resist quiet descent sometimes a rainbow is painted in wax of a crayon born from fear insecurity pain and heartfelt surrender he resisted to reach out for wellies and brolly better to stand naked in the face of thunder and light his thick skin dissolved under pressure the torrent which became the only way to reach mind body and soul

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Date: 7/25/2025 5:38:00 AM
Change doesn't come easy. I like your reference to thick skin. Hard to permeate, but not impossible. Another self-respective write?
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