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Soul Speaks Senryu-W

Higher and higher
I rose higher and higher
Lost shadow,dear.
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Fifth placement
Contest: Souls speaks Senryu

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Farah Chamma

July 30, 2010 at 3:21 AM

mmm..this write gives one something to think about. Congrats on the win and thank you for your comments =) Farah

Andrea Dietrich

July 28, 2010 at 6:36 PM

Congrats, Dr. Ram. I bet you had fun teaching Animal Farm! IT's a great story. This was a nice senryu. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

July 28, 2010 at 4:29 AM

Great Senryu..If this is for a contest, good luck for it is a sure winner...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.."Beneath The Rock"..I did it as a challenge for a contest on another site...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 27, 2010 at 7:35 PM

Don't forget to enter my new contest posted today... am sure u will thrill me with your entry.. looking forward to it.. with luv..

Timothy Brumley

July 27, 2010 at 5:14 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram, well done! This poem is in essence what I expressed in my poem 'A Lark Ascending'. My poetic take on Ralph Vaughan Williams Violin masterpiece.

Joyce Johnson

July 27, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Congratulations Dr. Ram on a lovely haiku and win. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

July 27, 2010 at 12:36 PM

Yes for sure the shadow is eventually lost. Congratulations Dr Ram on your poem's success in Linda's contest. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2010 at 12:02 PM

Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Linda-Marie Bariana's contest "Soul Speaks Senryu". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

July 27, 2010 at 11:58 AM

lovely one Dr. Ram, congrats on your win, luv Francine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 27, 2010 at 11:57 AM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your fifth place win in my Soup Speaks contest.. wonderful words... thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2010 at 7:34 AM

I enjoyed reading your newest poem today Dr. Ram. Wishing you the best in the contest. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol