Soul of Sea Stars

"Like a shooting s t a r,
         plunging from lunar fields of lavenders,
  to touch the aqua a b y s s a l,
      I  f i d d l e away my c o l o s s a l fears,
             letting go of all that one h a d
      in trusts and t r y s t s,
                thereby, surrendering to the
       ' Soul of the Seven Seas ',
            flowing like v e l v e t beneath
                           the 'Ship of Dreams' "

I've been a miridical monet of elegance, fading along those husky honours of a mademoiselle, who twirls in a ballet within glassy snow globe. Maybe, I've always worn a tiara of thorns and thistles, like Lilith ~ cruising through this vetiver voyage, across cactus kingdoms where the 'Gods Of Wind' slice my essence in every strife. This Atlantic ocean shall home my secrecies and serenity, which I knitted within teal seafoams, conversing with crystal nymphs and fountain-fairies, residing in the Picasso moors of bizarre brushstrokes. Shedding all the sins in fate's sinking sanctuary that will sing in a forlorn ode, I wonder, would my fingers prick like poison into the marine peace, placed on the pedestal of solemn solitude, making it bleed, evermore? This Amphitrite never unfurled in cherry kismets like a rose blossoming in dawning riverscapes ~ forevermore yearning to feel the warmth of love's oath, in Poseidon's palace, hence, I shall enclose my soul in opal oysters, crowned on a freezing bed of snow, foreseeing my rebirth as a 'Hope Pearl', that never rusts away. In an Icy affair of the champagne moon and milky waves, as we chase salts of survival, I will feel the kiss of spring's warmth, if my cherished ones, escape these unforgettable titanium tints of the Titanic, that shall erase their wishes and faith in a time-reversal, skipping beyond the throbbing turbulence of this tragedy. I was never afraid of becoming a kin of death, but as the last drop of wine spills, making a soft crackle in the kohl sleet, a horror crawls upon my spirit, for, those familiar faces succumbing to their unwanted demise, shall haunt me, in speckles of 'fare thee well'.
Wrapping Aurora Borealis around my palm, I will take a dip in silky s e a w a t e r s and let my r u i n s blend with frozen white a s h, where this throat e c h o e s sirens, when the 'Heart of the Ocean' shimmers and never remains an u n h e a r d cacophony...
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Poet Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:20 AM
Back with hearty congratulations dear friend Hiya.
Rose  Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Your words are always so well orchestrated who could ever call them cacophony, no one. This is in a class all of its own, congrats dear Hiya :)
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 7:05 AM
"I was never afraid of becoming a kin of death, but..." - very typical of your style. A grand free verse. Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 2:16 AM
Congratulations on your win angelic star! Told you this will win. Despite the metaphors its very emotional, and moving with creative diction! Well done! And well deserved
Poet Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Your poem delves into themes of inner turmoil, and self-discovery dear Hiya. The diction used in the poem is rich and evocative carefully selected to create a sense of mystery and depth, with phrases like "miridical monet of elegance" and "vetiver voyage" adding a touch of exoticism to the text. Your use of alliteration in phrases like "fading along those husky honors" and "crystal nymphs and fountain fairies" creates a musical quality in the language.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 6:12 AM
I like how you formatted this piece. It has a cool vibe combined with stunning imagery.
Amah Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 7:06 PM
... the sea comes to life as the adventurist herself, bearing the universe like some young archers for an ancient war!!! And our hearts must dance of fear and delightful admiration like some Trogan warriors ... these beautyful commotions look like those my Niger chambers, near the Niger maidens, Mbari amazons and their gladiators! An awfully great share!!!
Bowring Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Gosh dear sweet one, like dear Inky says, where does one even start with this absolutely awe inspiring read. There is so, so much here to admire and I’m always astounded by the depths (ocean depths ) of your masterful skill, artistry, creativity and imagination. You could write about say a paper bag and make it a masterpiece! That’s how amazing you are as a poet sweet one. This is a piece where you can return and return and there would be something else to discover each time.
Bowring Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Magnificent imagery, alliterations - everything! The last but one stanza really grabbed me. So profound, so emotive. Beautiful dear Hiya. Stunning masterpiece. Keep inspiring throughout 2024. You light up the page. Big hugs and admiration xx
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 1:30 AM
So many tragic memories, so great imagery. You mesmerised us with the ocean.
Greenhough Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 6:57 PM
An ocean tragedy, here in this poem, is brought back to memory. I feel the reality and horror. This poem is a thumbs up for me.
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Beautiful in splendor of your artistry--awesome as always, Hiya.-- where the 'Gods Of Wind' slice my essence in every strife--like a rose blossoming in dawning riverscapes---a time-reversal, skipping beyond the throbbing turbulence of this tragedy-- A FAVE for this symphony of emotions saying farewell eloquently!
Hind Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 1:26 PM
A lot of depth, and emotion, and beauty. I loved the part about survival and the end about Aurora Borealis around your palm. Way stretch of mind...
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 12:01 PM
Creative work penned. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
One Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Your poem is a mesmerizing voyage through the vast landscapes of emotions and self-discovery. The metaphors and imagery, like the shooting star plunging into lunar fields and Lilith cruising through the vetiver voyage, create a rich image of experiences. The exploration of solitude and rebirth, symbolized by the 'Hope Pearl,' is particularly poignant. The use of elements like the Atlantic ocean, crystal nymphs, and the Titanic tragedy adds layers of complexity to the narrative..
One Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:03 AM
The final stanza, with its vivid description of wrapping Aurora Borealis around your palm and letting your ruins blend with frozen white ash, leaves a lasting impression. Your words resonate like the echo of sirens, ensuring the 'Heart of the Ocean' never remains an unheard cacophony..
Empress Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Gosh where do I even begin, this is just beyond impeccable with such sumptuous metaphors and alliterations and imagery that left me awe inspired and captivated. Titanic seas has a new lyrical flow and rhythm to it as i read your well crafted lines, i couldnt help but feel the depth of how those last moments would have been. I love your use of poseidon to also add a mythological touch to this. Ans from all the lines in this i think i love the most how youve written the ending! So good! You’ve use
Empress Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 8:42 AM
everything beautiful in life to beautify a terrifying moment. Especially as you wrote “ Wrapping Aurora Borealis around my palm, I will take a dip in silky s e a w a t e rs and let my r u i n s blend with frozen white a s h,“ just wow! From opal oysters to salts of survival to lilith! Left me speechless! A favw this is for me. Best wishes for the contest
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