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Soul of My Life

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go . . . " ee Cummings Tender are your ruby lips, my smile has ever kissed Gentle is your sweet smile (adoration of my lips) Every breath of my being, a breath of your heartbeats Steps of my existence (mere walks in your shadows) My dear, what you’re thinking, my mind always knows. Cadence of your pulse (a synchronous beat of lyrics) Love of my life, you’re sound of harmonious music Inspiration of my verses (you’re the tune of melodies) Rhythmic are the love-phrases serenading your praises. Blush of blossoming flowers (in garden of my spring) And scent of pink-roses on wings of summer-breeze Blessed are you my angel (in my autumnal dreams) And snowflakes of my desires in winter’s riant revelries. In parable of my life (you’re the gift of love story) In folklore on romance (you’re my mythical fairy) Soul of my life you are the full moon in my heart In view of my blazing sky, you’re forever brightest star. November 4, 2019 Placed 1st: Strand choice contest 6 by Brian Strand Placed 3rd: Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 3/27/2024 12:15:00 PM
Vijay, I did not see a new poem to comment on so I went back for the fun of it. I can only imagine how lucky the recipient of this love is. It's a potent expression of fondness for another person. You are amazing.
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:40:00 AM
Beautifully written, Vijay. Sounds like you love her a lot :)
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Date: 1/26/2020 5:55:00 PM
Congrats my friend on your win!;)
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Date: 11/19/2019 10:22:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
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Date: 11/19/2019 7:40:00 AM
All crave such a connection. Well expressed. I see congratulations are in order. Well done! Blessings Rick.
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Date: 11/19/2019 1:52:00 AM
Hi Vijay congrats on your win
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Date: 11/18/2019 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautifully written!;)
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Date: 11/18/2019 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win Vijay :)
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Date: 11/18/2019 4:37:00 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely poem and I like how you wrote in the style of ee Cummings, he would be proud !
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Date: 11/18/2019 1:58:00 PM
- Congratulations on a lovely 3rd place in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:32:00 PM
This is lovely imagery, Vijay.
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Date: 11/10/2019 4:07:00 PM
the full moon in your heart smiling paints a very beautiful piece vijay i pray you have a blessed week
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you Liam--much appreciate my friend.
Date: 11/8/2019 8:57:00 PM
Beautiful, vividly descriptive poem, Vijay. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 11/7/2019 5:24:00 PM
She is beauty in all aspects, Beautifully penned Vijay, Best for a top win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2019 6:20:00 AM
Much appreciate Joseph..many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2019 5:11:00 PM
Your words are like honey, mouthwatering to the soul.. You never surprise me your a fountain of romantic verse... a winner for sure don't even have to say good luck. hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2019 6:19:00 AM
So kind of you, Eve..appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2019 4:55:00 PM
Hey Vij, can I send some snow your way ?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2019 6:19:00 AM
No not yet--but appreciate the offer.
Date: 11/7/2019 11:05:00 AM
Sweet love poem here - especially "Inspiration of my verses". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2019 6:18:00 AM
Much appreciate Matthew..many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2019 9:27:00 AM
Vijay, Your poem told through the seasons of life and love is delightful. I loved the 'blush of blossoming flowers of spring..And scent of pink-roses on wings of summer-breeze'. Truly nice to find. -Richard
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2019 9:52:00 AM
Much appreciate Richard, your visit and comments--many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2019 7:55:00 AM
Great entry Vijay...sure to do well my friend...keep them coming dear poet...^WW^ :o)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2019 9:52:00 AM
Appreciate the vote of confidence, WW..many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2019 6:37:00 AM
You seem to be an expert on love and poetry, winning wishes Vij, we just got our first snowfall of the year here. xo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2019 9:51:00 AM
Snowfall already! Enjoy!! Much appreciate, my friend.
Date: 11/7/2019 3:09:00 AM
A lot of love here...you let it all pour out....All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate, my friend.
Date: 11/6/2019 10:57:00 PM
In parable of my life, my favorite line. Excellent poem. You are a master. Ann
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Ann--appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/6/2019 7:17:00 PM
that is one amazing love tribute, Vijay. A high placement I bet!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2019 9:49:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 11/6/2019 5:59:00 AM
There is no greater words of affection then "love of my life" how I envy your pen, it dances on the page better then any other pen I know. Love xo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2019 8:39:00 AM
You are very kind, Pixie..much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.
Date: 11/6/2019 3:21:00 AM
Your verses my friend, Vijay, a ladder leading onto the culmination of poetic beauty!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2019 8:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend..much appreciate.
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