Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Soul of My Life

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go . . . "
                                   ee Cummings

Tender are your ruby lips, my smile has ever kissed
Gentle is your sweet smile (adoration of my lips)
Every breath of my being, a breath of your heartbeats
Steps of my existence (mere walks in your shadows)
My dear, what you’re thinking, my mind always knows.

Cadence of your pulse (a synchronous beat of lyrics)
Love of my life, you’re sound of harmonious music
Inspiration of my verses (you’re the tune of melodies)
Rhythmic are the love-phrases serenading your praises.

Blush of blossoming flowers (in garden of my spring)
And scent of pink-roses on wings of summer-breeze
Blessed are you my angel (in my autumnal dreams)
And snowflakes of my desires in winter’s riant revelries.

In parable of my life (you’re the gift of love story)
In folklore on romance (you’re my mythical fairy)
Soul of my life you are the full moon in my heart
In view of my blazing sky, you’re forever brightest star.

November 4, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand choice contest 6 by Brian Strand
Placed 3rd: Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Duke Beaufort March 27, 2024 at 12:15 PM Vijay, I did not see a new poem to comment on so I went back for the fun of it. I can only imagine how lucky the recipient of this love is. It's a potent expression of fondness for another person. You are amazing.

Angela Crabtree November 12, 2020 at 9:40 AM Beautifully written, Vijay. Sounds like you love her a lot :)

Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 5:55 PM Congrats my friend on your win!;)

Eve Roper November 19, 2019 at 10:22 PM Back with congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve

Richard Lamoureux November 19, 2019 at 7:40 AM All crave such a connection. Well expressed. I see congratulations are in order. Well done! Blessings Rick.

Na Na November 19, 2019 at 1:52 AM Hi Vijay congrats on your win

Brenda Chiri November 18, 2019 at 9:18 PM Congratulations on your win! Beautifully written!;)

Heidi Sands November 18, 2019 at 6:56 PM Congratulations for your great win Vijay :)

Constance La France November 18, 2019 at 4:37 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely poem and I like how you wrote in the style of ee Cummings, he would be proud !

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2019 at 1:58 PM - Congratulations on a lovely 3rd place in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser November 13, 2019 at 5:32 PM This is lovely imagery, Vijay.

Liam Mcdaid November 10, 2019 at 4:07 PM the full moon in your heart smiling paints a very beautiful piece vijay i pray you have a blessed week Vijay Pandit November 11, 2019 at 8:59 AM Thank you Liam--much appreciate my friend.

Janice Canerdy November 8, 2019 at 8:57 PM Beautiful, vividly descriptive poem, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit November 9, 2019 at 7:50 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Joseph May November 7, 2019 at 5:24 PM She is beauty in all aspects, Beautifully penned Vijay, Best for a top win.. Vijay Pandit November 8, 2019 at 6:20 AM Much appreciate Joseph..many thanks.

Eve Roper November 7, 2019 at 5:11 PM Your words are like honey, mouthwatering to the soul.. You never surprise me your a fountain of romantic verse... a winner for sure don't even have to say good luck. hugs Eve Vijay Pandit November 8, 2019 at 6:19 AM So kind of you, Eve..appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose November 7, 2019 at 4:55 PM Hey Vij, can I send some snow your way ? Vijay Pandit November 8, 2019 at 6:19 AM No not yet--but appreciate the offer.

Matthew Anish November 7, 2019 at 11:05 AM Sweet love poem here - especially "Inspiration of my verses". Peace & Love Matthew Anish Vijay Pandit November 8, 2019 at 6:18 AM Much appreciate Matthew..many thanks.

Quoth Theraven November 7, 2019 at 9:27 AM Vijay, Your poem told through the seasons of life and love is delightful. I loved the 'blush of blossoming flowers of spring..And scent of pink-roses on wings of summer-breeze'. Truly nice to find. -Richard Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 9:52 AM Much appreciate Richard, your visit and comments--many thanks.

Winged Warrior November 7, 2019 at 7:55 AM Great entry Vijay...sure to do well my friend...keep them coming dear poet...^WW^ :o) Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 9:52 AM Appreciate the vote of confidence, WW..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose November 7, 2019 at 6:37 AM You seem to be an expert on love and poetry, winning wishes Vij, we just got our first snowfall of the year here. xo Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 9:51 AM Snowfall already! Enjoy!! Much appreciate, my friend.

Arturo Michael November 7, 2019 at 3:09 AM A lot of love here...you let it all pour out....All the best Vijay Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate, my friend.

Ann Foster November 6, 2019 at 10:57 PM In parable of my life, my favorite line. Excellent poem. You are a master. Ann Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thank you Ann--appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2019 at 7:17 PM that is one amazing love tribute, Vijay. A high placement I bet! Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 9:49 AM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose November 6, 2019 at 5:59 AM There is no greater words of affection then "love of my life" how I envy your pen, it dances on the page better then any other pen I know. Love xo Vijay Pandit November 6, 2019 at 8:39 AM You are very kind, Pixie..much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 6, 2019 at 3:21 AM Your verses my friend, Vijay, a ladder leading onto the culmination of poetic beauty! Vijay Pandit November 6, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you my friend..much appreciate.

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